Eyes speak words of soul,
Dripping black smut of kohl,
Glistening mystery untold!


This haiku is shared with carpe diem and the prompt is eyes!

*Dark Angel*


  1. Dark Angel welcome at Carpe Diem a daily haiku meme. I am glad that you've found your way to here. I am your host on Carpe Diem and I hope to see more haiku like this one on Carpe Diem.
    What about this haiku? It's a wonderful haiku and it leaves me in awe ... I love that last line very much "Glistening mystery untold!" that's what haiku is about sharing untold mysteries in a few lines and words.
    Thank you for sharing this gem with us all.

  2. those are indeed a beautiful pair of eyes... looks like yours.. LOL

    and the piece was swift and exquisite!

  3. Beautiful.Indeed,charming and mysterious eyes!

    1. I love mystery! I wish I had a mystery machine like scooby-do gang!

  4. Whose are those deep, enchanting pair of eyes?
    Your haiku creates great imagery.

  5. Congrats i've nominated you for the Liebster Blog award , please follow this link to my blog for more details : http://reina2000.blogspot.com/2013/01/i-got-nominated-for-liebster-award.html

  6. In search of something, are we?



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