Night




My thoughts come alive late at night,
Mistakes, heartbreaks, sadness and the pendulum of life!
Waves of emotions, self contradiction,
An empty thought like an empty vessel,
On an abandoned seashore.

Tear drops or rain,
A sudden hope or just burning ashes of time,
A blurred vision and a road ahead.

A hope within a hope,
A dream already dreamt,
Stuck in a motion of life,
 I'm sanely insane,
My thoughts ceased to rhyme!



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Comments

  1. I had been wondering why I wasn't getting any updates from your blog. Did you change your blog URL? I thought, like the many blog friends of mine, you had stopped blogging as well. Glad that you are blogging and I finally managed to get back here. Tried following you again...hope it works.

    The poem is very relatable. There comes a phase in our lives when we go exactly through what you have described here. Emotions and humans...a deadly combination. :D

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    1. Thank you for visiting back after a long time. I didn't change anything, maybe it was some technical glitch, anyway I am happy to find you here reading my random thoughts :)

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  2. A very fine poem, which gives a peek into the heart of the writer. The following lines' are really profound.
    A hope within a hope,
    A dream already dreamt,
    Stuck in a motion of life,
    I'm sanely insane,
    My thoughts ceased to rhyme!

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  3. Thoughts I can relate to...like you, I am nocturnal too. all my awareness comes alive at night...
    "thoughts ceased to rhyme",... when thoughts go out of control and one thoughts leads to another that too unrelated ...even those unrelated thoughts you have summed up meaningfully into this poem, thank you for that ,

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    1. Thank you for connecting to my thoughts. I have read your mail, I will write to you this week :)

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